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Original characters for Yu-Gi-Oh!. Lowel and Jackie. As planned, they will be a large part of the sequel to History Repeats Itself (someday-to-appear at ff.net). I'm seriously thinking of just calling this sequel "The Sequel." 
I would've colored it, but it'd just be grey and white anyway - both their hairs are white, and their outfits are grey and white.
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I would've colored it, but it'd just be grey and white anyway - both their hairs are white, and their outfits are grey and white.
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Hmm.. I'm definately not a yami fan, but I'll comment anyways (sorry if I'm critical).
You're doing a pretty hard angle, but most of it carries well. The hands are really good as well. However, the way the neck joins on the person on the left is a little too low, making the chin look much too large. I suggest curving the bottom "jaw" line at a sharper angle and having the "neck" line just meet it higher up, maybe with a little curviness to it. (maybe this makes sense?)
Also on the wrinkles, it looks like your trying to force them too much. I'm no professional, but quoting another artist I'll say that you shouldn't try to hard on adding wrinkles; they'll come eventually in a more natural way, but for now don't push them too hard.
Sorry if this sounds mean; (I'm really not trying to be.) Just thought I should crit a little, and I honestly am trying to help. Anyways, goodluck on your doujinshi.
You're doing a pretty hard angle, but most of it carries well. The hands are really good as well. However, the way the neck joins on the person on the left is a little too low, making the chin look much too large. I suggest curving the bottom "jaw" line at a sharper angle and having the "neck" line just meet it higher up, maybe with a little curviness to it. (maybe this makes sense?)
Also on the wrinkles, it looks like your trying to force them too much. I'm no professional, but quoting another artist I'll say that you shouldn't try to hard on adding wrinkles; they'll come eventually in a more natural way, but for now don't push them too hard.
Sorry if this sounds mean; (I'm really not trying to be.) Just thought I should crit a little, and I honestly am trying to help. Anyways, goodluck on your doujinshi.